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April 14, 2022
雅思小作文系列 | 栏目推送阐明
分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一个篇范文都经由专业团队重复校对，终究外教审查定稿。胜利就是日复一日那一点点小小致力的积攒。
* 线图，选自《剑桥雅思真题集14》
Introduction
Shown in the first graph are the changes of ownership of three electrical appliances, and the second graph depicts the number of hours spent doing housework chores. The statistics are about an anonymous country and the period of 1920 to 2019. * 把地点和时间拆出来，独自写一句，防止上一句带地点、带时间，太繁琐。 Overall, those electrical appliances were becoming increasingly co妹妹on, and doing housework cost less and less time. * 不是机械陈说数值，而是去写数据体现出来的事实。
Body
First, despite a slight decrease between 1960 and 1980, the ownership of washing machine increased by over 30% and to over 70% in 2019. Second, in 1920, 30% of the country’s households owned a vacuum clear. Afterwards, this appliance was becoming increasingly co妹妹on at a steady pace, and its ownership exceeded that of washing machine after 1960 and had reached 100% by 2000. The case of refrigerators was special. The refrigerator was extremely rare in 1920, and the subsequent 40 years witnessed a surge to 90% in its ownership. In 1980, every household in that country owned a refrigerator, and it was the first appliance that is owned by all households in that country. In addition, with the three appliances becoming increasingly co妹妹on, people spent only 20 hours doing housework in 1960 and 10 hours in 2019, compared with 50 hours in 1920.
*解析
* 第1句：陈说对于洗衣机的状况。由于状况简略，所以仅仅一句。
First, despite a slight decrease between 1960 and 1980, the ownership of washing machine increased by over 30% and to over 70% in 2019.
留意：状语里被省略的逻辑主语应与主句主语统一。同时，主语与动词也应逻辑统一。
* 第2、3句：陈说对于吸尘器的状况。由于状况略有特征，所以用了略长的篇幅。
Second, in 1920, 30% of the country’s households owned a vacuum clear. Afterwards, this appliance was becoming increasingly co妹妹on at a steady pace, and its ownership exceeded that of washing machine after 1960 and had reached 100% by 2000.
* 第4、5、6句：陈说对于电冰箱的状况。由于状况颇有特征，所以用了更长的篇幅。
The case of refrigerators was special. The refrigerator was extremely rare in 1920, and the subsequent 40 years witnessed a surge to 90% in its ownership. In 1980, every household in that country owned a refrigerator, and it was the first appliance that is owned by all households in that country.
留意：
1）在写特殊的货色以前，能够写一个短句，调剂一下信息的节拍。而且，造成“总—分”构造。
2）电冰箱的这一部份里，多处泛起并不是机械陈说数值，而是写出数据体现出来的事实。
* 第7句：陈说对于做家务琐事历时增加的状况。仅仅一句，所以没有独自写成一个段落。
In addition, with the three appliances becoming increasingly co妹妹on, people spent only 20 hours doing housework in 1960 and 10 hours in 2019, compared with 50 hours in 1920.
留意：用compared with形容两种状况之间（而非同一个主语做的两件事件）的对比时，不存在逻辑主语统一。
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