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Book  Title:   The  Wump World
The Wump World is a great book written and illustrated by Bill Peet. It’s about a type of animal named ‘the wump,’ which looks like a cross between a moose and capybara.

The wumps live on a beautiful grassy planet named The Wump World where food was plentiful and there were no predators. But one day, some creatures named pollutians invade the planet, and send the poor wumps hiding in an underground cavern. Many years later, The Wump World became so polluted by the factories that the pollutians built that they had to leave. Read the book to find out what happened to the wumps, and if The Wump World will ever be the same again.

My opinion about this book is that it’s short, but very good. I liked how Bill Peet tried to tell the reader to stop polluting the planet through a short, fun story. The wumps were amazing creatures and the pollutians were fun to read about. But I didn’t really like the ending, how the pollutians just gave up. I mean, they didn’t even get to see the wumps, and the ending’s a bit simple. Bill Peet could have made the pollutians seem more dangerous and exciting. Overall, this was a great book, and it’s excellent for anyone who likes the sound of ‘wump creatures.’
When I found this book in my teacher’s reading box, I thought it looked pretty interesting so I read it. I would give this book a 4.0 out of 5 stars, and reco妹妹end it for all ages.

wsb

lz能够让他改写下开头，假如他有兴致的话

wugang8023

写得很好。实在天然，丑陋的书评。

xprimer

写的乏味！

drylu

固然有兴致！群主能给点倡议吗？怎么样改写好？

uio0

能够让他从某个章节接起，接上去任他自在发扬了

右手

再发一篇，马上就能换鞋了！

Title: The Enormous Crocodile

The Enormous Crocodile is an excellent book written by Roald Dahl and illustrated by Quentin Blake. It’s about an enormous crocodile that tries to eat children, but fails every time!

The Enormous Crocodile loves eating children, it’s basically his hobby. He tries to eat them in four clever attempts, in which he calls ‘clever tricks.’ The children are saved by four smart animals: Humpy-Rumpy the hippo, Muggle-Wump the monkey, the Roly-Poly Bird and Trunky the elephant. The Enormous Crocodile goes on exciting adventures, trying to find yu妹妹y children to eat! Read this awesome book to find out if the Enormous Crocodile continues his evil ways, or is gotten rid of once and for all.

My opinion is that this book is lovely, with an amazing tale about the Enormous Crocodile who loves to eat children. The animals and the children were very interesting, and the illustrations were absolutely beautiful! My favourite scene was when the Enormous Crocodile was talking to the Notsobig One about delicious children that he would like to eat. I liked this scene because it’s very fun, and it starts off the book. What I disliked about this book is that it’s very short, and Roald Dahl definitely could have made this book longer, to make it more interesting and exciting. It’s also a bit repetitive, how the animals kept saying the same thing, when the Enormous Crocodile was walking through the jungle.

When I saw this book at a book shop, I knew I was looking for it, so my grandma got it for me. This is essential for anyone who likes fables and Roald Dahl books.  I would give The Enormous Crocodile a  4.1 out of 5 stars, and reco妹妹end it for ages 8-十一.

cs_sos

中的宝宝都这么厉害。

yangzi1985

写得很好，特别是su妹妹ary，晓得有所保存吸引他人来读。晚上叫我家娃来看看。

欢送持续分享，分分确定有

fybing815

会的会的！我会激励他持续写，帮妈妈多嫌分分！