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    2021-5-15 22:57:03 153 25

    The Missing Wand

    Once upon a time, there was a princess named Charlotte. Charlotte had a wand and a pet unicorn. The unicorn’s name is Cindy. One late afternoon when she was watering the plants, she heard a strange sound. Someone broke the window and took Charlotte’s wand. Charlotte was worried because the missing wand had the magic to freeze and unfreeze. If it was in bad people’s hand, it could cause big trouble. Initially she thought it was her stepsister who always takes her things. But her stepsister was celebrating her auntie’s birthday and she was not in the castle.

    The next day Charlotte’s auntie called to tell her that her birds were frozen and stuck in the tree. The Charlotte realized that it must be her wand that did the magic. Charlotte called Cindy i妹妹ediately to visit her auntie and look for the wand. On their way to auntie’s house, a dragon came out and blocked them. Thanks to Cindy, Charlotte was able to ride and fly away from the dragon. Suddenly a heavy fog came out. Both Cindy and Charlotte were lost in the forest. This time again it was Cindy who used her horn to find the direction and took Charlotte to her auntie’s place.

    Everyone came out to welcome Charlotte and Cindy except for her cousin Vanessa. Auntie told Charlotte that Vanessa was very sick. Charlotte and Cindy went to Vanessa’s room. However the room was empty. They looked around the room and heard something strange. It was the wand who saw the princess and called, “Help me! Help me!” They realized that it was Vanessa who stole the wand and locked it. Charlotte said some words and the wand was flying out from the cabinet.

    Charlotte used her wand to unfreeze the birds. The birds were so happy to have life again. Vanessa came out with her head full of birds poopoo. Vanessa apologized to everyone and told Charlotte that it was her and the dragon who flew to the castle and took the wand. She thought she could use the wand to control the birds but misused the wand. Charlotte forgave her cousin and whispered to her ear.

    Half a year later, Charlotte received a message from a bird. The message was from Vanessa: “The birds and I are friends now. Thank you for teaching me to have a loving heart.”

    全部回复25

    xiwen3 发表于 2021-5-15 21:29:08

    xiwen3 沙发

    2021-5-15 21:29:08

    孩子平时看书挺多吧,二年级写故事很棒
    fybing815 发表于 2021-5-15 21:31:20

    fybing815 板凳

    2021-5-15 21:31:20

    这就是他人家的孩子
    sisisi 发表于 2021-5-15 21:34:25

    sisisi 地板

    2021-5-15 21:34:25

    真棒
    慕蓉秋月 发表于 2021-5-15 21:37:07

    慕蓉秋月 5#

    2021-5-15 21:37:07

    真的很棒
    山鹰 发表于 2021-5-15 21:39:23

    山鹰 6#

    2021-5-15 21:39:23

    很棒哦!
    mm999 发表于 2021-5-15 21:42:04

    mm999 7#

    2021-5-15 21:42:04

    他人家的
    3iii 发表于 2021-5-15 21:52:26

    3iii 8#

    2021-5-15 21:52:26

    二年级能把这么多情节串连起来,的确很棒!
    696364 发表于 2021-5-15 21:54:03

    696364 9#

    2021-5-15 21:54:03

    太棒了!
    heidian 发表于 2021-5-15 22:00:06

    heidian 10#

    2021-5-15 22:00:06

    Lz should be very proud!
    xprimer 发表于 2021-5-15 22:03:54

    xprimer 11#

    2021-5-15 22:03:54


    有几个拼写过错被我纠正了。仍是要持续致力。
    mjl 发表于 2021-5-15 22:05:36

    mjl 12#

    2021-5-15 22:05:36

    很棒的故事啊
    魔法和暴力不是解决问题的捷径
    有爱世界才更美妙
    明月照我心 发表于 2021-5-15 22:08:30

    明月照我心 13#

    2021-5-15 22:08:30

    十分棒!
    daodaodor 发表于 2021-5-15 22:13:02

    daodaodor 14#

    2021-5-15 22:13:02

    二年级啊,太牛了!我家也有二年级娃,几句话都写不出来
    warrior0 发表于 2021-5-15 22:17:01

    warrior0 15#

    2021-5-15 22:17:01

    很棒的娃!
    wugang8023 发表于 2021-5-15 22:19:43

    wugang8023 16#

    2021-5-15 22:19:43

    很厉害!
    sssty 发表于 2021-5-15 22:22:48

    sssty 17#

    2021-5-15 22:22:48

    他人家的娃。。。。
    wy0009 发表于 2021-5-15 22:32:42

    wy0009 18#

    2021-5-15 22:32:42

    感觉太厉害了
    右手 发表于 2021-5-15 22:36:52

    右手 19#

    2021-5-15 22:36:52

    太棒了,请问娃平时都看些甚么书呀?
    yyfreeliang 发表于 2021-5-15 22:38:49

    yyfreeliang 20#

    2021-5-15 22:38:49

    厉害,觉得有些小孩儿也写不出这些货色
    graven 发表于 2021-5-15 22:40:25

    graven 21#

    2021-5-15 22:40:25

    小姑娘棒棒的。
    luzf2004 发表于 2021-5-15 22:43:57

    luzf2004 22#

    2021-5-15 22:43:57

    真棒
    lagxxxx 发表于 2021-5-15 22:45:09

    lagxxxx 23#

    2021-5-15 22:45:09

    才二年级,长江后浪
    lagxxxx 发表于 2021-5-15 22:46:54

    lagxxxx 24#

    2021-5-15 22:46:54

    小作家
    fybing815 发表于 2021-5-15 22:48:30

    fybing815 25#

    2021-5-15 22:48:30


    她不爱看书,就喜爱看电视、ipad。
    sssty 发表于 2021-5-15 22:57:03

    sssty 26#

    2021-5-15 22:57:03

    厉害了牛蛙

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