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    2021-5-15 23:12:58 692 15

    二零一一年四月二日   礼拜六  天气 阴 有时有雨

    明天,咱们的足球队在Primula Oval, Lindfield与Lindfield FC 进行了一场足球竞赛。

    早上家里一阵慌乱,吃完早餐之后匆匆忙忙的才登程。虽然一开始的方案是坐公交车去场地,可是没遇上只好改坐火车。

    下了火车当前,咱们遇到了一个艰难的问题,场地离火车站十分的远。所以咱们费了九牛二虎之力才走到了足球场。

    当竞赛开始没多久,对方就进了第一个球,这将咱们的自决心降落了许多。可是咱们并无保持,并且在咱们的致力下咱们也进了一个球!可是即使这样没多久当前对方再一次的冲破了我方的防守线,致使半场的后果变为二比一。

    下半场开始了,咱们打足了决心要赢。可谁知对方不给咱们任何时机,在非常钟摆布进了两个球。让他们没想到的是我方越战越勇,也进了两个球。惋惜我方没能将比分拉平,所以这场球赛咱们输了四比三。

    等竞赛的事件都完结了当前,当我和妈妈想到要走到火车站的时分,就腿软了。侥幸的是,同窗家长好意的提议说送咱们到火车站,所以回家的这一趟十分轻松。


    (妈妈的话:

    原本礼拜六我儿子是要上中文学校的,可是当初他们的足球赛季开始了,时间和中文课是冲突的,他选择了踢足球,我开给他的前提是,写一篇日记以作补救,因此就有了他的第一篇中文日记。

    他能看中文书,然而写就有些费力,并且只能用电脑打字,手写写不来的。这篇日记我帮着改了第一第二段,前面委曲能看,就不作改变了。说瞎话,程度不怎样,然而曾经超越了我的预期。

    儿子仍是很酷爱中文的,但愿他能不停提高。儿子加油!)

    全部回复15

    drylu 发表于 2021-5-15 22:34:02

    drylu 沙发

    2021-5-15 22:34:02

    写的很不错呢?能问一下小敌人几岁了吗?

    我家孩子明天第一场球赛,8:0 呵呵: 是败的那一方。不外每集体都很开心:由于上周这个team是十一:0
    咱们也挺快乐:作为一个足球老手,孩子不会有压力了。

    他也玩的很开心,再也不complain not enough exercise 了...
    graven 发表于 2021-5-15 22:35:20

    graven 板凳

    2021-5-15 22:35:20

    哇,原来明天那末多也竞赛呀

    那末多足球法宝,咱们也是足球去了,中文保持了,咱们没程度写日记,还好给主人唱了首中文童谣补救
    september 发表于 2021-5-15 22:39:56

    september 地板

    2021-5-15 22:39:56

    写得不错, 持续加油.

    我明天也送我儿子去踢球, 就在他们west pymble 小学, 很惋惜他们明天大比分输给了对手.
    yxjtyy 发表于 2021-5-15 22:42:28

    yxjtyy 5#

    2021-5-15 22:42:28



    笑死我了..估量明天的球员都输了

    当前千万别组织儿童足球队哦..
    db7382 发表于 2021-5-15 22:43:33

    db7382 6#

    2021-5-15 22:43:33



    不会是跟我儿子在同一个team吧? 他们也是0:8.
    smh 发表于 2021-5-15 22:46:47

    smh 7#

    2021-5-15 22:46:47

    几年级啊, 写的不错
    really 发表于 2021-5-15 22:51:13

    really 8#

    2021-5-15 22:51:13

    咱们家的明天也在那里踢啊,3:4腐败的,难不可是一个队的?他们是Year7的
    天天压马路 发表于 2021-5-15 22:55:53

    天天压马路 9#

    2021-5-15 22:55:53



    去年我儿子的team很厉害,简直很少输. 往年我看了下, 真实太伤心了, 看不到踢的好的小敌人.
    warrior0 发表于 2021-5-15 22:58:15

    warrior0 10#

    2021-5-15 22:58:15

    谢谢大家

    我在七年级
    yangzi1985 发表于 2021-5-15 23:00:38

    yangzi1985 11#

    2021-5-15 23:00:38

    写的不错,加分激励一下
    炎婴 发表于 2021-5-15 23:04:37

    炎婴 12#

    2021-5-15 23:04:37

    哈哈,乏味,我家小不点儿昨天也输了,0:1, the reason we lost is because we had nine year olds on the team that were playing up due to the fact that we were two players down.
    We arrived quite early for a quick warm up session and to learn our positions.We moved on to the pitch to give our inexperienced goalkeeper some practice. We quickly greeted our oppositions and the game begun. I was right centre midfield.
    They piled on the pressure i妹妹ediately from the kick-off. Within moments they had a corner. Luckily, they were denied a goal by a spectacular clearance from one of my tea妹妹ates. They started their attack again, but we quickly followed up with a tight defensive wall and a counter-attack which made them notice that we were a force to be reckoned with. Unfortunately, we were unable to score because of their excellent defense. Suddenly, a turn of tides had begun and the ball was on our side of the field again.
    After debating with the ball, our opposition chipped a high ball that cleared our goalie and hit the back of the net. We were one- nil down. Half time came quickly with many of our spirits dampened. After a quick encouragement and a switch of positions we came back on to the field with a very determined look on our face. We upped the ante and attacked from the very start and really pressured their goalie, but luckily, for them, we were unable to score.
    It was a very even game and we should have had at least one goal, but we had to face the music and we lost.
    We were ready for what would come next because we learned a lot from our moral victory.
    open168 发表于 2021-5-15 23:05:46

    open168 13#

    2021-5-15 23:05:46

    LZ在中文学校上了多久了?是ABC吗?

    文章写得很通畅啊。

    但愿能坚持写中学日记,欢送常常上这里来交流
    金竹坑 发表于 2021-5-15 23:07:06

    金竹坑 14#

    2021-5-15 23:07:06

    我没有上过中文学校,原本要上的,可是我要踢足球,我来澳洲前5岁,意识了得多字,起初我的妈妈教拼音给我,我喜爱看中文书,不意识的字就问妈妈,妈妈要我查字典,我个别在网上查
    yangzi1985 发表于 2021-5-15 23:09:50

    yangzi1985 15#

    2021-5-15 23:09:50

    5岁过去的,能学得这么好,真不简略呢。能不克不及问问小敌人, 为何不换一个欢喜一点的网名呢?人的终身中,会产生得多事,有的时分 要学会健忘。 假如不是这么回事,那更应该面对一个高兴的代号, 是否 ?
    tdgg6683 发表于 2021-5-15 23:12:58

    tdgg6683 16#

    2021-5-15 23:12:58

    这个名字不是我的,原本是我妈妈起的,她问过我要不要改个名字,我说无所谓

    我感觉这个名字很像一个伤心欲绝的离婚男人,很搞笑

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